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By your not so secret admirer by ~Shiny-Marble:iconShiny-Marble:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


I can tell that you're watching me,
So I do not look around.
I can tell you're listening to me,
So I will not make a sound.

It's not that I don't like you,
Don't get me wrong, I do.
It's just that I can't let you know,
How much I care for you.

I giggle every time you speak,
So I would have thought it clear
That all I really want,
Is for you to be right here.

If I ever get my way,
It means you'll never see
That your happiness is mine
And how much you mean to me.

From your ( not so ) Secret Admirer
©2007-2009 ~Shiny-Marble
:iconshiny-marble:

Author's Comments

This is a poem about my crush who has a girlfriend who is my friend. I wrote it in Chemistry and PE today at school. Yeah.

Poem is mine.

Please no critique/critism (even though I don't normally get any, anyway), I'm not feeling like it today.

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=HorseRidingGal May 18, 2007, 12:42:01 AM
That's a lovely poem. ^_^

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~Shiny-Marble May 18, 2007, 10:20:07 AM
Thank you very much. ^^

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~YoungTimeLords May 21, 2007, 10:21:34 AM
That describes me and my friend Jack sooo well. It's like you know me. O.o
Thank you for bringing these beautiful mixture of words into my life. :hug:

Sarah :heart:

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~Shiny-Marble May 21, 2007, 8:58:35 PM
I'm really glad you can find a connection with this poem. I'm really glad that you like it. ^^
I try not to make it too personalised so that others can feel the emotion. :hug:

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"Heck is where you go if you don't believe in gosh"
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~YoungTimeLords May 22, 2007, 10:26:35 PM
Yeah, see. You can do that. I just write down my feelings and I don't usually care if anyone likes it or not. ^^;

Sarah :heart:

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When someone says "Reverse the plarity of the neutron flow," don't reverse the polarity of the proton flow.

From Earth to Raxicoracofalipatorious, from America to England. Anywhere. Chrono and Elizina
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~Shiny-Marble May 23, 2007, 7:32:31 PM
=3 =3 Thanks. Usually I don't care what people think of me as a person, but I try to make poems (etc) flow nicely, hence usually asking for critique on it.

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"Heck is where you go if you don't believe in gosh"
Check out this awesome [link] !
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~YoungTimeLords May 27, 2007, 2:13:34 AM
Ah right. Well, when you write poems, yours actually come out good. Mine do not. lol

Sarah :heart:

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When someone says "Reverse the plarity of the neutron flow," don't reverse the polarity of the proton flow.

From Earth to Raxicoracofalipatorious, from America to England. Anywhere. Chrono and Elizina
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~Shiny-Marble May 27, 2007, 7:33:39 PM
Thanks very much, but I'm sure if you uploaded them I would see that they are good.

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"Heck is where you go if you don't believe in gosh"
Check out this awesome [link] !
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